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Crayola sketching
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Crayola sketching |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland 
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She sits alone. I don't now whether it's blood or tears she cries It looks as though her heart is breaking a thousand times Cause the record's stuck on "loop" I sit, alone wondering and trying to make it better with words. Lines on a paper, sound waves in the air. Seems stupid really. I trace a line across my chest, used my crayolas first. And I wonder. Next came the big guns I hold my breath and my head pounds. My heart is in my hands, love, and I'm giving it to you. farewell the ash-tray girl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! fantastic write I can sure relate to! |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
I wrote it for my friend who's suffering from depression and the like. Bad stuff. But she's gonna win. thanks for reading xx |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I know these words all too well myself. Depression has brought me down to my lowest point and I know some people who've gone lower. It is a battle we can win, if we choose. And I'm glad to see that you have faith in your friend. They are very fortunate to have you by their side. Most people would give up, but you know what I say to those types of people, they weren't worth my time and they're weak. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I can relate to this as well. This is a fantastic poem! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
your crayolas sketch such gentle and supportive love; enjoyed this a bunch! miscellanea |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
Sometimes it's not a choice to give up. thank you for all your lovely comments. xx farewell the ash-tray girl |
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