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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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0 posted 2006-03-29 09:57 PM


These tears I cry.
Are nothing wet running down this cheek.
These tears they fall,
breaking all my dreams in two.

Breaking my heart
balancing it in two.

These tears are fears,
nothing for the truth.
Not reality, but scared.
Fear is not real.

Its all in my head,
breaking my mind.


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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1 posted 2006-03-29 09:59 PM


balance is a good thing, most times
it's the breaking that hurts

love the way you ended this write

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-03-29 11:33 PM


YEP!
I agree.
Great write.

JL


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