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OwlSA
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0 posted 2006-03-29 11:27 AM


ECHO
29 March 2006

Mosaic enchantment
everwest coasting
green
but then she always preferred
Greek
to Latin
except for the trees.

- Owl

© Copyright 2006 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2006-03-29 12:17 PM


Very interesting, Diana....left me wondering though, yet it was fulfilling to read.  
JL
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2 posted 2006-03-29 02:24 PM


Hummmmm...?
I'm to thick for this to sink in.
Much too deep for me.  But I do like the sounds and visions of the wording.

JL


OwlSA
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3 posted 2006-03-29 02:24 PM


Thanks, Martie. Mm, yes, a little unfair of me to post this - it's one of those "had to be there" things - a conversation of sorts.

- Owl

OwlSA
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4 posted 2006-03-29 02:29 PM


No, JL, you're not thick at all - just honest!  Also you (and Martie) have just helped me illustrate my point that you don't have to understand a poem (or a piece of music) to enjoy it.  Thank you for liking the sounds and the images.

- Owl

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5 posted 2006-03-30 12:26 PM




"everwest coasting"

Beautiful turn of a phrase Diana. I enjoyed the mood and movement of this poem.


OwlSA
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6 posted 2006-03-30 09:07 AM


Thanks, Kate for enjoying it.

- Owl

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7 posted 2006-03-30 08:19 PM


neat write, what I like to call a "mood write"

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8 posted 2006-03-30 08:53 PM



Conversations are good.
One never knows
when they will fall into
something similar

and remember this.


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9 posted 2006-03-30 11:17 PM


Owl....

a wonderful write, with, I am sure much meaning.....nicely done...

And so it those we live with
and should know who elude us
But we can still love them
we can love completely
without complete understanding

OwlSA
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10 posted 2006-03-31 01:42 PM


Thank you passing shadows, Sunshine and Greeneyes, and yes, you are right Greeneyes.  

- Owl

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