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From Shallow to Depth
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From Shallow to Depth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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From Shallow to Depth A poetically practical person paused tennis-clad feet ankle deep in clear liquid cool, not to place a spring in time but to time a spring in rush knowing another would welcome some wonder of her wander  So, this is where I begin my day, in a poet’s photographic splurge, skimming some shallow, knowing from whence the iced mountain it traveled, falling first in avalanche, then in white water, hitting upon rocks, dissolving particles into time, time, and substance, narrowing, widening, thinning, an awakening of a morn, trickling, traveling… sweet and clear, only toward its some one day meeting with destiny, and a tear drop of salt, taking its final plunge to the sea, onto some depth, beyond light, toward some core, where heat bubbles from a center that evolves in time with life. [to be continued] ~*~ Photo, Courtesy, JanetMarie |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Loved the trail, Karilea....and the picture is beautiful....  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, you might have started out your morning with this beautiful wander, but I am finishing my night with it. Awesome.....jo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem, Karilea!! I love that photo, too. Looks so calm. Huggies, Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely picture...and words... I can't wait for the warmth so I can walk the trails or bike them here. I promised myself not to ignore nature this year !  M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
and a tear drop of salt, taking its final plunge to the sea, onto some depth, beyond light, toward some core, where heat bubbles from a center that evolves in time with life That's it exactly. Certainly not the highway, and no low way....the deep way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
oh, oh, oh, Sunshine! Thank you for both the poem and the picture! - Owl |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Most inspiring words and picture!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...I knew that had to be a JM photo....you've put words to it in the most perfect way!!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
not to place a spring in time but to time a spring in rush love the easy play of those two lines! Hope all is well with you, friend (and how's the book deal goin'?) Corinne |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
tis beautiful Sunshine, all her wander...  And so it those we live with |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
 Great! Great! Great! J L |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Dear Karilea The picture is the perfect compliment to your lovely words. Fabulous imagery. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I thank Sue for bringing this up! I wouldn't have wanted to miss this!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Well that certainly asks for reading over and gazing again. What a magnificent duo, photo and poem. |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
It's very good Sunshine. Maybe even great! Let me read it agin, at times, your words over my head. But, that's not your fault. Hugs, Bubbles |
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