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mighty mouth
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since 2006-01-05
Posts 24
Missouri, USA
0 posted 2006-01-16 12:07 PM

I will take you up on your offer.
I would love to dance with you.
I will take your hand
As you guide me around
Your world of words.

Teach me your ways,
And listen to mine.
From each other we will learn
New ways and new ideas
And new steps to incorporate into our own worlds.

The dance has started.
The music around us blares.
With you I will take a trip or two
Around this dance floor.
Let us welcome stares of the unaware.
© Copyright 2006 Suzy Snow - All Rights Reserved
openthoughts
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 94
Where the child can be free
1 posted 2006-01-16 01:42 AM

I see a good deal of depth.  I believe it was Ernest Hemingway that said, "All great literature is an iceberg, seven-eighths of it is below the surface." I think it's great how few feelings are covered in the poem but the poem itself eminates a variety of emotions
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2006-01-16 01:48 AM

wonderful dance of words, flowed liked a waltz

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing
dickiegreenleaf
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 10
Canada
3 posted 2006-01-16 02:02 AM

"stares of the unaware"

great line
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2006-01-16 04:04 AM

You have payed Steavnr quite a compliement to his earlier write today!  Enjoyed this; and Welcome to Passions!
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
5 posted 2006-01-16 09:59 AM

welcome to passions...some are getting close...wink...wink
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2006-01-16 12:02 PM

Indeed! The dance has started! Welcome to PipTalk!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel
mighty mouth
Junior Member
since 2006-01-05
Posts 24
Missouri, USA
7 posted 2006-01-16 05:46 PM

Thanks for the welcome everyone. I cannot begin to tell you how fun it is to be a part of this. Should be fun!
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