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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-03-28 09:15 AM


We All

We all walk paths of circumstance
Looking for that dance of romance
Casting nets within our bloom to
Catch this fantasy of consume

We search each rainbow for its key
That one of matching filigree
The one that opens up the door
For two into the evermore

But evermore is time itself
Digesting all including self
And from its friction fiction comes
The fifers’ music and the drums

It is a firefly in the dark
Each light an area, a spark
Lending to the fantasy scheme
And the romance of the dream

I feel it will a pedestal stand
For it is made of time and sand



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Toerag
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1 posted 2006-03-28 09:20 AM


You still here?.....You gotta be almost as old as me?....How ya been Psai?
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2 posted 2006-03-28 09:26 AM


But evermore is time itself
Digesting all including self

really enjoyed this........very thought provoking

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-03-28 04:16 PM


always love your endings Sy
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4 posted 2006-03-28 04:52 PM


Hello Seymour,
It's so good to see you and your wonderful rhyme!!

This part of your poem stood out to me....

"We all walk paths of circumstance
Looking for that dance of romance
Casting nets within our bloom to
Catch this fantasy of consume"

Very, very good writing, as always.
Huggies
Ethel

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5 posted 2006-03-28 06:14 PM




Beautiful Sir. I look forward to your work.


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-03-28 07:40 PM


Toerag
You turn up at the weirderest times. LOL
How have you been?

luminosity
So glad you enjoyed.

passing
Then happy endings to you.

Ethel
You are simply a love.

Lady
And I look forward to your replies.

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7 posted 2006-03-28 10:02 PM


Philosphy at its best!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2006-03-28 10:24 PM


A big thank you sky.
Sunshine
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9 posted 2006-03-28 10:28 PM


But evermore is time itself
Digesting all including self
And from its friction fiction comes
The fifers’ music and the drums

~*~

we dance the dance of incomplete
until the end, when music's sweet
is tender dying on the vine,
then tip the last sweet drop of wine...

you always inspire
and that is why we
call you Dear...


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2006-03-29 08:48 AM


Sunshine

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11 posted 2006-03-29 10:36 AM


Sy darling man, what a delight to read your words again, just stopped in to drop some pink smiles and be caught in poetic whirl. This is really lovely, and I like it very muchly
You always are a joy to read, thanks for the gift
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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12 posted 2006-03-29 11:25 AM


"It is a firefly in the dark
Each light an area, a spark
Lending to the fantasy scheme
And the romance of the dream"

This line spoke to me.  It captures, for me, the essence of the dance of romance.  Well done Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

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