Open Poetry #37 |
We All |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
We All We all walk paths of circumstance Looking for that dance of romance Casting nets within our bloom to Catch this fantasy of consume We search each rainbow for its key That one of matching filigree The one that opens up the door For two into the evermore But evermore is time itself Digesting all including self And from its friction fiction comes The fifers’ music and the drums It is a firefly in the dark Each light an area, a spark Lending to the fantasy scheme And the romance of the dream I feel it will a pedestal stand For it is made of time and sand |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You still here?.....You gotta be almost as old as me?....How ya been Psai? |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
But evermore is time itself Digesting all including self really enjoyed this........very thought provoking |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your endings Sy |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Seymour, It's so good to see you and your wonderful rhyme!! This part of your poem stood out to me.... "We all walk paths of circumstance Looking for that dance of romance Casting nets within our bloom to Catch this fantasy of consume" Very, very good writing, as always. Huggies Ethel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Beautiful Sir. I look forward to your work. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toerag You turn up at the weirderest times. LOL How have you been? luminosity So glad you enjoyed. passing Then happy endings to you. Ethel You are simply a love. Lady And I look forward to your replies. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Philosphy at its best! ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A big thank you sky. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But evermore is time itself Digesting all including self And from its friction fiction comes The fifers’ music and the drums ~*~ we dance the dance of incomplete until the end, when music's sweet is tender dying on the vine, then tip the last sweet drop of wine... you always inspire and that is why we call you Dear... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sy darling man, what a delight to read your words again, just stopped in to drop some pink smiles and be caught in poetic whirl. This is really lovely, and I like it very muchly You always are a joy to read, thanks for the gift as always Mushy x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"It is a firefly in the dark Each light an area, a spark Lending to the fantasy scheme And the romance of the dream" This line spoke to me. It captures, for me, the essence of the dance of romance. Well done Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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