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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-28 06:18 AM


If the rains never come
I can fill the need
with pages of my life
mulched until they bleed.

Moisture laden waiting
shadowed in its stay.
Youthful inner feelings
yet "aged to prime" this way.

Humpty Dumpty edged
awaiting phantom call.
Caught, yet not, in private life
a Cinderella fall...

Clinging to the tales
swept up by dreams wished true.
On wings of words I empty out
to reign this day anew.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
poettothecars
Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-03-28 06:55 AM


Child's Rain


Where rain was weather
an open heart
This day in seeking
wanting a desire found

Over a quickness to judge
an element of light
What was first
as to zygote or egg

God created - yet taken
a world of complication
Inquisitive - understanding
mixed up in factors of love

What did it mean
this tower of cards spread
A table of significance
life over death - a child is born


just a ditty from me - words of inspiration - I was given to compose here

a poet who cares

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-03-28 12:50 PM


"On wings of words I empty out
to reign this day anew."

Bravo nakdthoughts!!
What a great idea, for all.
Enjoyed!!

JL

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

3 posted 2006-03-28 01:30 PM


We make do, and then discover that making do is pretty wonderful afterall. Nicely done, M. Bob
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2006-03-28 09:10 PM


loved that ending M

good write here!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2006-03-29 05:29 PM


Yes....that's what writing is in a way, well said.....jo
Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2006-03-29 06:18 PM


Hey, can I send you some of our rain? LOL, loved the write m'dear.
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