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What have you done for the Sun
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What have you done for the Sun |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
I ask; what have you done for the sun and the moon and the smooth velvet wind that has whispered to you? What have you won for the one that has done this for you? I ask; what have you done for the slant of the rain that cannot be held by hand or by eye? What have you done? Oh! What have you done for the crawl of the hour the tint of the day? What have you won for the one that has done this for you? What have you done for the sun? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very good questions and made me ponder....then made me smile. Kathy, Wind chimes sing unto the wind and crystal lines my window pane catching sun beams, bending shine into a rainbow, quite devine. Can't quite tell you what I've done for the moon....I'll be thinkin' on that one. Enjoyed this........jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathy! I like this! And by way of response: I looked to the sun as the moon peaked o’er to stand in view of the two; thanked the sun for all her warmth and the moon for all his view I gathered the rain onto my cheek helped the wind find hidden places wound the clock of time again as love was caught between some traces I cherished a moment, than a moment more between the moon, and the sun’s adore. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Kathy, I love this, and also Iliana's and Sunshine's responses. What a beautifully woven trilogy! - Owl |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Thanks all...I love your responses! |
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