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a masked line in the dust
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a masked line in the dust |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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I took your picture down finally stored it carefully with the rest of your memories layered in thoughts, buried a ‘things to toss box’ ‘flip the coin over’ you said that’s just what I did today, and when your likes didn’t come up heads or tails I drew a line in the dust, crossed myself over it and left your picture where it rests best we are both free now |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
VERY NICE POETRY, I REALLY ENJOYED IT....PAUL shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The last energy cords are cut! Fly high ~ fly free!   Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I had to burn a photograph to get past it. Kacy, you are able to say so much so well with just so few words. *hugs*...jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Oh, I really like this one. I always felt if the end must come,it has to be with style and as few words as possible. Words don't bring back anything but memories. martyjo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Paul, thank you! EA, smilin here Jo, that toss-it box is for real  martyjo, guess you've swept some dust too |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I guess the word I am looking for is 'impactful'--it was so...straight-thinking...like you just wanted to just say 'yes'...when you were finished and rest in the moment of awareness |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Steaven, I am smiling here, as I am rarely accused of straight-thinking. I am delighted this came across as a yes! thanks much for reading and commenting! |
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