Open Poetry #37 |
Soul Walk. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Inside me, my bounteous soul, a man walks upon downland too far to be reached, stretching to the lands of freedom.Golden curling clouds aloft, where sun shines warm enough for joy to burst into minds. Fields of flowers wild, Euphrasias, Eyebright's, Round Headed Rampions, smothering rippling grasslands. He walks alone, but never is he truly alone, within the shade of his shadow, God watches in silent love. Examining each and every wonder that feasts his eyes with colourful profusion, he fills his soul. Silver and Gold illumine, light his way through meadows fluttered by rich hued Argus, Orange Tip, Chalk-Hill and Adonis Blue butterflies, enrapturing an amber heart open to all possible vibrant allure. Tears mingle with wild wind blown rain, splashing bracing energy, to stare ahead, to more beauty. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Phil, I truly enjoyed your "Soul Walk". You ended it so beautifully ~ "Tears mingle with wild wind blown rain, splashing bracing energy, to stare ahead, to more beauty." May the road ahead become even more beautiful with every step! Love & God's Light, Linda |
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emeralddreamer Junior Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 27PA, United States |
This is a most beautiful and touching poem. ~clapping~ |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Golden curling clouds aloft, where sun shines warm enough for joy to burst into minds. That part kind of just....shined, in my mind |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a beautiful and touching poem; I like the imagery too!!!!!!!!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now that is a beautiful walk, Phil! .......jo |
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