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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
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0 posted 2006-03-23 12:24 PM


Lost

Why is it that when I finally feel like I belong,
that I wake from my fantasy and realize that I have not been found yet.
No one has come to rescue me from this
life and I begin to wonder
“is there anyone out there anyone out there that will come into my world and surrender me from this nightmare”
How come, when I finally feel like I belong,
that maybe there is a place in this world for me; it’s then that you turn your back on me
I fantasize that this world is full of laughter, Joy, suprises and hope
And I am never proven to be right but that only makes me want to find ...
laughter, Joy, suprises and hope even more
because I know you’re out there
and I will find you.
I am going to look deep in to all of your souls and if I don’t find you then I will look elsewhere because this life is too precious for me to waste.
Or have I made it that way?


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-03-23 12:28 PM


When you have 'hope'...
You may find that laughter, joy, & suprises,
will soon find you!!  
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-03-23 12:33 PM


this reminded me of me, many years ago, learning that you cannot depend on other people for happiness...it's got to come from within...otherwise, thru expectation and an idea of some fantasy romance, we accept very little and the relationship disappoints us...

finding oneself is through self exploration...making ready for tomorrows...

excellent write and vent

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