Open Poetry #37 |
Awakening |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This feeling stirs deep within I now begin to see you in a different light The sun is now rising The day chases away the night There is no more suffering Time to ease away the pain For I realize so many are worse off What makes me think I have darker rain? I can't promise That I'll never cry again Afterall that makes us human I know now though I can fight-I really can Is this what they mean When they speak of an awakening When you still feel so much deep inside Long after you've stopped shaking Dark moon be kind Let the sunshine warm my face I promise I'll be grateful I yearn to be more like her-full of such grace Two steps forward, then I fall one back That is okay though I never expected things to be easy The darkness though now isn't so black There you are Floating, just barely out of reach I think I'm beginning to understand now If I'm patient-I can hear you teach The red embers of the fire That use to burn so hot inside They are cooling off now-giving away To something more-from this awaking I can not hide "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
There is no more suffering Time to ease away the pain For I realize so many are worse off What makes me think I have darker rain? This was so brutally honest, it brought a feeling of great respect... wonderful writing lady! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You shared your awakening so eloquently. I love your smiling face in your new photo. It is as if you are right here spreading your beautiful Light! I also think that your signature line is wonderful! Sending you lots of love and Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An honest and beautiful write Amy! Well done! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster You tell it like it is. Good write. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thank you all for the wonderful replies. It means so much to have friends like you! Hugs, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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