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Aching Still...
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Aching Still... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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that first kiss on rusted lips taken until learned to give freely the wind today has chapped them in thought of the last touch and their missing of... tracing them with warmth while words are sensed throughout thinking that... knowing that... you hold my smile. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
tracing them with warmth while words are sensed throughout thinking that... knowing that... you hold my smile. smiling at you M, this smile sure does look beautiful on you. HUGS! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Donna, good to see you  I am thinking good thoughts while I try to get this flu bug to go away... it is clinging to me...  M |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 . . bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
omg M, April was sick with the flu two weeks ago, and again today at the doctors for some sort of stomach flu. She isn't to go to school tomorrow either. She was sick all night, I felt so bad for her. Get well soon, and hugs. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I think you are getting over it M..it doesent seem to be afecting your mind at least..on the evidence of this poem..enjoyed the read..thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful words... Beautiful smile. Feel better soon M. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
As always, your words touch deeply within- Hope you feel better soon! Take care. Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
you hold my smile You certainly held mine Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully sensuous |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done M |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
bernie to you Hope you are improving...Donna, this thing seems to be going round and round changing its effects... Hope April is feeling better soon. Thank you hugs. Phil, my mind is always running (too) as long as the aching stops I can withstand it all. Thanks for your responses always Nancy...you know we have to watch everything, if I let myself get upset over the smallest things my resistance becomes nil. I can almost predict when I will become sick if anything traumatic happens in my life. Thank you, I know you understand M Amy, it is so good to see you here. Hope all is well. Thank you Interloper, if I could see you maybe I could hold your smile too  So good to have you back.LeeJ,it was meant to be sensuous thanks for noticing. Dix, hey ..I see you made it Tracie, thank you for reading and responding ~~ M |
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