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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Pajama Trauma ~*Marge Tindal*~ I mount the mare of nightly fright as she stampedes helter-skelter amongst the bedcovers Afraid of the ride I attempt to hide but am short-sheeted once more by the snore of my Knight in pajama-trauma I hear his screams as he wrestles to tame poetic mustangs within his own dreams gone wild~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
RIDE 'EM COWGIRL  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....I hear them too, from someone different than you, but still it's about the listening and the love.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A delightful smile. Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I really enjoyed this one dear Marge! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, good to see you poem here. What a night, huh? Enjoyed the clever poem. ...jo |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Certainly a clever poem to write perhaps also a difficult one as well I loved the idea all the same something to smile about for sure a poet who cares |
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cody 2 Junior Member
since 2006-03-12
Posts 48london |
good one,cleverly put together |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent, Marge! A poetic "dream" come reality.... Well done! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Just had to laugh at the picture this paints. I know those short sheet feelings! If it's not the hubby stealing the sheets, you can depend on an intruding dog or cat! Darling poem, Marge! misc'e |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
LOL how cute |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Oh! What a ride. Oh, what a poet we have here!!! |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
I know exactly how you feel Mardge. Happens every night 'round here! Great write!!!! Hugs, Kathy |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi Marge~ this is great - funny, witty and visual  loved it ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's one thing I don't miss~~~  hugs M |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Marge, This is cute  Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone ... this one really came as instant inspire from the subject of NIGHTMARES thrown out for poetic contemplation at a poetry site ... my muses took it and ran with it~ A fun penning for me~ I needed that~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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