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Trust Me
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Trust Me |
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PazSqual Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 71 |
Trust Me Two simple words put together and used so freely Asking someone to put their lives in another’s hands Two simple words, for such a difficult task I am not asking you to Trust Me That is a feeling you develop on your own All I can do is show you who I am Let you see the person in me Two simple words can paint quite a few pictures But by showing myself to you You can paint your own picture of me And let time build the feeling in your heart to Trust Me |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe when relationships begin, we as humans automatically trust the other person, until that trust is violated, or strengthened. There is so much beauty in trust, and so much heart ache once trust is broken. Good poem |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
My brother is a physician. I found a shirt with a saying on it that was perfect for him and gave us both a laugh...it says, "Trust me, I'm a doctor".  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PazSqual Trust is like quick silver. Enjoyed |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I like it. The way you crafted the words to come back to the words "trust me" at the end was great. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
it's great |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Words from one in whom I feel I could place my trust!  Love & Light, EA  |
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