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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
Stars are eyes, and though they hang from far heaven's reach they still can gaze within my skin and behold this galaxy of essence and blood. As if they saw a mirror, in my heart All the stars in the sky know me, they silently beckon my attention and I humbly bow before my own reflection. This walking dust that I am, that shining dust that speaks above at night we are kindred of the same event that time when time began. (PS. i encourage critique, even if my profile says otherwise.. could anyone please tell me how do I change that in my profile? thanks. Ixtab, 13-espejo. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW! I like this very, very much!  |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
This is so profound and beautiful, no criticism necessary! This is one for my library too!  The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is very well written. To change your critique message. Go to your Profile, scroll down and check the Encourage Critiques box. Any problems drop me an email. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
Iliana, Rainbowdust thanks for the read and the comment. I don't know if it is that well written but thanks anyway. I posted another poem recently and I beleive it's a bit better than this. Thanks Enchantress i'll try it out. |
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