Open Poetry #37 |
Unable To Break Through |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Unable To Break Through I had written continually Yet you never wrote back Which only proves to me Its feelings you must lack I ask how you had been Yet you still refuse to say Silence seemed to prove Feelings journey one way I had kept my heart open Yet I am hurting obviously Was it worth me asking Why you apologise to me I hoped to keep in touch Yet it seems to be in vain Unable to break through Since being ignored again I questioned your silence Yet I reached a dead end Writing got me nowhere I failed in whatever I send Hope ©2006 Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/98/poem_826769.html |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hope, I've missed reading you 'cuz I've been pretty tied up lately. As always, you write your feelings so well. jo |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Hope...Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed as always...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes I think it is better to just remain casual friends, Hope...that seems to last longer than becoming more involved, especially if a long distance relationship or on line...one never knows the behind the scenes of another's life which may keep them from communicating. M |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Iliana and Paul , pleased you enjoyed the read and your replies were so much appreciated Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Maureen for your thoughtful reply , yes it has been a huge part of my life for 10 years Hope |
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