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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-03-19 11:03 AM

Randy’s Wake

Each year my Randy Dragon wakes
To quell the roomers of my death
To stretch my wings and sooth my aches
And light the candles with my breath

I stay the day await the night
To catch some wishing fire flies
Then spread my wings and take to flight
To catch the light in dreamers sighs

They fill the night with wails and moans
That guides me like a magnets pull
With calls that warm a dragons bones
And pull a snort from any bull

They stay a cornucopia
Where shadows dance upon the wall
A symptom of myopia
And dance to music’s mental call

Here the candelabra’s burn
The very wax of dreamers yearn

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

1 posted 2006-03-19 04:51 PM

"They fill the night with wails and moans
That guides me like a magnets pull
With calls that warm a dragons bones
And pull a snort from any bull"

Fanciful! You draw pictures in the sky sir, but tell me... is there perhaps a small play on words in this piece?

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2006-03-19 05:00 PM

''To catch the light in dreamers sighs''

enjoyed this line sey..but i enjoyed all of the imagery of it and of course the rhyme..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2006-03-19 05:26 PM

Lady
Yes a play on words and phantoms. Thank you dear.

Goldenrose
You are sensitive to what I write, thank you.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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4 posted 2006-03-19 06:20 PM

You made me smile when I thought it was impossible.

Two kisses today, sy,

one for you

and one for randy

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-03-19 06:48 PM

"Each year my Randy Dragon wakes
To quell the roomers of my death
To stretch my wings and sooth my aches
And light the candles with my breath

I stay the day await the night
To catch some wishing fire flies
Then spread my wings and take to flight
To catch the light in dreamers sighs"

Ah that Randy dragon finally woke up
and found it's almost spring.

Well done Sy..
~Hugs to you and for Randy too!~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2006-03-19 07:38 PM

serenity,
Wonderful to make you smile. Hugs and

S back

Mancy
Thank you sweety.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2006-03-20 09:05 AM

Sy,

Very cool write indeed...the rhyming on this was absolutely magnificent! Your ability to weave words into something much more never fazes to amaze me!

Take care,

Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2006-03-20 09:23 AM

Amy,
Thank you der for the read and comment.

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

9 posted 2006-03-20 10:53 AM

What a way with words! I can see why Serenity smiled. Thoroughly enjoyed.

Rae

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2006-03-20 11:05 AM

Rae,
Enjoyed your comment, thank you.

cody 2
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since 2006-03-12

Posts 48
london

11 posted 2006-03-20 12:16 PM

I liked the unrealness,i will look at more of your work, well done

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2006-03-20 12:17 PM

Sy you have such a way with words. Thoroughly enjoyed this offering!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2006-03-20 01:20 PM

cody 2
Thank you.

scorpio
Glad you enjoyed it was meant to bring a smile.

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

14 posted 2006-03-20 05:11 PM

Seymour...Thanks for sharing. Much enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2006-03-20 06:36 PM

Paul,
Thank you for the read and comment.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

16 posted 2006-03-21 04:14 AM

Had to have a little Sy tonight...it's been too long. Little did I know I'd be meeting Randy, too....lol!

.....jo

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

17 posted 2006-03-21 04:53 AM

The Spectacular Seymour and the Amazing Randy are both unequaled in the casting of their spells. I am always entranced.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

18 posted 2006-03-21 07:54 AM

morning sweet sy

for you

for me

gotta lot of catching up again
i hate missing yours. its like missing
a class for a daily lesson from a Q? book. dont know exactly what,the Q is for but that is what enters my mind. it could start witha k too i believe
anyway

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

19 posted 2006-03-21 08:06 AM

iliana
Everyone has a Randy. LOL Thank you dear.

Uriah,
Well that makes me feel special, thank you.

MGROVES
Missed you and your K's Where do you go anyway?

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