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Open Poetry #37

Render Me Insignificant

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-03-13 11:51 AM

Render Me Insignificant

I have intended to write
So it was not writers block
Yet how could I explain
It's more a feeling of shock

I am stunned by silence
Not knowing where to start
Perhaps its the conflict
Going on in mind and heart

I remained up in the air
More like being suspended
I'm neither up nor down
Is it what you had intended

I was feeling the impact
Shed a few tears obviously
Words would be useless
Since you already hung me

I choked back the words
Reason I was out of rhyme
Render me insignificant
Sorry for wasting your time

Hope ©2006

Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/97/poem_824665.html

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2006-03-13 11:55 AM

Nothing insignificant in this write. Intense and moving.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-03-13 11:55 AM

"I choked back the words
Reason I was out of rhyme
Render me insignificant
Sorry for wasting your time"

Hope~ No one is ever insignificant.
This absolutely aches.
Heart Hugs, Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2006-03-18 10:24 AM

is it ever really a waste of time...at least you learn from each experience and hopefully don't have them repeated.

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