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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
I know it's no use to chase you, You hide in the one place I can't see... plain view. No, you will never be found by a seeker like me, for, what is more precious than a soul? How can I hold what holds me? Your eyes, your face...NO! Tis no physical body that I crave... because, even though you are already naked before me... I undress you still! |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Very nice! I enjoyed this very much. Bubbles |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"even though you are already naked before me... I undress you still!" Fantastic Kathy! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Truth enough, sometimes what we know of one goes far beyond what we can see. And the imagination is a very powerful thing. Well done, Kathy. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"...what is more precious than a soul?" A ponderous question for sure. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~"You hide in the one place I can't see... plain view." ~"what is more precious than a soul?" ~"even though you are already naked before me... I undress you still!" Gosh, I suppose I should have just gone ahead and quoted the whole poem! Every line was a gem!  EA |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Thanks ~ All! Higs, Kathy |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
They say beauty fades like a flower. They were talking about the skin deep kind I suppose. The kind that is of least importance. Greatly enjoyed Kathy! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like this! |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
Oooo, how luscious! Me likes. ~.^ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The very definition of that L-word....the one we misuse so casually that we sometimes forget what it really means. Safe to say you don't miss the true meaning, though....this nails it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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