Open Poetry #37 |
I can remember |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I can remember I can remember From the age of about ten You were a frequent part of my life When from over sea you came To live your life here with us I can remember Visits to your house You would have lollies As well as hugs waiting I loved visiting Nan I can remember In summer you would Come to our house for a swim I’d always swim with you Playing games in the pool I can remember Growing up You were always there When I’d do something Special I didn’t have to look far For your smile I can remember The sadness on your face The day you lost your one The tears you cried Touched my soul I can remember How independent You became after Always out and about Nothing was slowing you down I can remember Your smiles When your great grandchildren came You played like you did When we were young I can remember The love You gave me How much it meant When I needed it I can remember Every Christmas I’d collect you Take you to my parents Where you’d have so much fun I can remember How I felt when I found out You had a fall And in hospital you were I can remember Visiting you How different you Looked and spoke Frail and disorientated I can remember When they called And told me you had a stroke How the tears ran Down my cheeks I can remember Our last visit Wishing you were better Seeing you weren’t Saying goodbye I can remember The call when I was told you had passed My tears flowed for hours Thinking of you I can remember The day I had to Say goodbye seeing you There in your coffin Crying constantly I can remember My Nan A special woman Who I loved dearly One I miss immensely |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can remember mine along with you... M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was deeply moved by your fond remembrances of your grandmother. I have similar, poignant memories of both of my nanas. You just brought them lovingly back to mind. I am smiling through my tears. Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Julie, it is those remembers that we live for after all else is gone. And it is the remembers that we leave behind for those like ourselves who follow... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It's a beautiful memory Julie and it made me remember my Nana. Ah, the wonderful women we came from. Thank you for this poem. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Oh, This makes me miss all over again the two great ladies I never knew. Thank you, martyjo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I can remember" in the end, that is what there is. |
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