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The Raven
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The Raven |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Raven The Raven stops here every day To check the changes of my stay Each stays a little closer look With added quotes made in his book He checks my eyes my tongue and nose And notes his book of all the woes He shuts his eyes and taps his beak And shakes his head but does not speak He ogles me my walk and moans The creaking of my weary bones He sets it on a mental scale In black and white and great detail He looks into the sky to gage The time and process of old age And then he winks a wink of sorrow Flies away until tomorrow But he’ll be back the first of grey The Raven stops here every day |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ahhhh, our old friend, the raven...Tell me, does this one whisper "Nevermore"? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, This one says "evermore" LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, I think he flew far away... and the bluebird of happiness has come to stay. Good day to you Sir! Hugs & Luv, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Good morning Blue Bird.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"But he’ll be back the first of grey The Raven stops here every day" Oh Sy! I love your Raven so much I can't tell you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I think you just did, thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL... I love this... though I'm not sure I'd like to have my aches and pains, creaks and groans catalogued each day! LOL Excellent work, my friend... evermore! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Don't let that raven wear you down Sy. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio I'll do my best. Thank you my friend. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
We have many ravens near where I live and I always amazed at their size. They are awesome birds. It's nice to read your words again, Seymour and I hope all is well in your life. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps the raven knoweth that ye be a true Poe-et. 'Tis a mighty fine penning that thou hast scribed!  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang I've seen the Raven and he is a large bird and clever too. It's just a poem, I'm ok. Thanks for the read and comment. Earth Angel It's a good symble and a descriptive one. Glad you enjoyed the write. |
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