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Open Poetry #37

There was a woman once.

cinnabar
Junior Member

since 2006-03-10

Posts 33
Lot et Garonne, France.

0 posted 2006-03-11 08:57 AM

When I am drifting
On the shores of sleep,
Or walking in the cool
Cathedral shade of trees;
When I stand waist deep
In moted murmurings
Of poppy sprinkled seas.
When I watch the red kite's
Wingtips beat its lonely trace,
Impulsed against the blue.
It is then, my love,
That I see your face,
And my sequestered heart
Turns, once more, to you.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-03-11 09:38 AM

Oh, bless her for blessing you...
or we would have never had such
a treasure from your pen.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-03-11 09:45 AM

Oh my!! How beautiful this is!
I am quickly becoming a fan!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2006-03-11 10:35 PM

excellent!

Buttons
Junior Member

since 2006-02-27

Posts 34

4 posted 2006-03-11 10:42 PM

Such a gentle flowing of words! Awesome!

Buttons

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-03-11 11:35 PM

You really know what to do with words!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

6 posted 2006-03-12 03:19 AM

It certainly is in the French tradition

cinnabar
Junior Member

since 2006-03-10

Posts 33
Lot et Garonne, France.

7 posted 2006-03-13 06:45 PM

I think I'm blushing. Thank you. Michael.

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