you........ (trying a Martie style)

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Open Poetry #37

you........ (trying a Martie style)

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2006-03-10 04:48 AM

you........

are a caress as brisk as
the autumns fall you are the
breath of idiom floating by my
windows thrall ...at midnight
you are the fresh in air
of mornings call
so while I
toss
on
sea
of dream I
reach to touch your
inner being but muse you
see fills depth of being so trying
I to circumvent wake to thinking
times of spent ...like love and
living without

you

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-03-10 06:10 AM

beautifully written

M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-03-10 09:40 AM

Lucky~
And 'lucky' are we that you share~

Our Martie ... yes, you've done her justice~

God blesses to you and Rosemary and kids~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-03-10 12:50 PM

Dale

"but muse you
see fills depth of being so trying
I to circumvent wake to thinking
times of spent ...like love and
living without

you"

Thank you for thinking of me and for your tender words!

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

4 posted 2006-03-10 01:29 PM

Thanks Sis

What do you think of the perm... trying to look a little younger here.

Dale

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

5 posted 2006-03-10 01:34 PM

nice perm, in a warm, hippy sort of way. I have curls too, but they're natural. Sometimes I like them and sometimes I want to cut them all off. By the way...it's not the outside appearance I look at, but the inner person. And you are very handsome there!!

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

6 posted 2006-03-10 01:43 PM

Aw... Shucks

The Lady
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The Southwest

7 posted 2006-03-12 12:42 PM

Good poem and the shape is great.

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