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Open Poetry #37

Five

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2006-03-08 02:41 PM

A flower in a vase
On the table in the hall
He came to see her pretty face
But she wasn't there at all
He left heartbroken.

Gloom

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-03-08 02:53 PM

aw, but does he try again later?

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2006-03-08 03:00 PM

Whom my say, when mending a broken heart,
How long will the mending take
After being rendered apart

Perhaps a sequel will break

Look for Five point one
It might be done

Gloom

Buttons
Junior Member

since 2006-02-27

Posts 34

3 posted 2006-03-08 07:55 PM

If this wuznt so sad I say gimme five. Gimme five any way... Nice poem.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-03-09 03:43 PM

Beauty! That one hits the spot!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2006-03-09 07:02 PM

So much said in so few words

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2006-03-09 07:30 PM

5.1

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2006-03-09 08:08 PM

Thank you all
5.1 now posted

Gloom

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

8 posted 2006-03-09 08:31 PM

Breaks my heart this does.... going to look for 5.1

Caroline

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