Open Poetry #37 |
Five |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A flower in a vase On the table in the hall He came to see her pretty face But she wasn't there at all He left heartbroken. Gloom |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aw, but does he try again later? |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Whom my say, when mending a broken heart, How long will the mending take After being rendered apart Perhaps a sequel will break Look for Five point one It might be done Gloom |
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Buttons Junior Member
since 2006-02-27
Posts 34 |
If this wuznt so sad I say gimme five. Gimme five any way... Nice poem. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Beauty! That one hits the spot! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So much said in so few words |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
5.1 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you all 5.1 now posted Gloom |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Breaks my heart this does.... going to look for 5.1 Caroline |
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