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Goodnight Stars
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Goodnight Stars |
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Quad_dune Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 26Ontario ,Canada |
The moon was out the stars were bright. We laid on the ground in the dark moon light. You lay by my side as we look at the stars. Away from the city and the noisy cars. Cocoa and cookies through the night. Till we awaken to dawns bright light. So up an atom and away we go. Back to our home and the city flow. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grinning at that ending 'up an atom' |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Do you know what first came to my mind when I read this poem? It was the movie starring Mandy Moore called A WALK TO REMEMBER. There is a scene in this moving just like what you wrote, where they had hot cocoa and cookies and laid under the stars and just enjoyed each others' company until the morning. Nothing seductive done, just enjoying each others' company. This is a beautiful poem. Sheri Adams Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
very nice poem. I felt I was there. huggs Kim |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
A peaceful picture. I enjoyed it. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
amazing write ! In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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