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They Don't Hear
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They Don't Hear |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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They Don’t Hear That moment when there is not enough sun for shadows to show, they hide before moon’s debut and spring scents air with neutral wait as some deep tawny blends in delicate balance between tree and ground struck in statuesque pose in that moment when some intelligent nudge of inner sense knows foot to pedal, break the speed to slow, still…light roll… There. Two, no, three doe stop the car in silent motion cross this curved road into evening. They don’t hear my sigh. ~*~ " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely. I saw them. I heard your sigh... did you hear mine? |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
A calm and beautiful scene, Sunshine.  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes....it's the quiet, peaceful moments that by some luck we're permitted to share....those, not the loud excitement, make living what it is. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....wish we had such in our city...but we do just a few miles away. You captured a place in between time with your sigh.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You captured that Kodak moment beautifully with your words. Thank you for sharing its sweetness. Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful. I use to see them before I moved back to the city. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Now that is sunshine in word form.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, oh, oh, I am going to hang this word-painting of the gentle does and the perfect backdrop on my heart. They may not have heard your sigh, but I know they felt and understood it. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this, Sunshine. - Owl |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
*SMILING* oh, you painted this so delicately the reader feels each brush stroke |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Wonderful, I really liked this. Beautiful imagery. Cheers - Ed “True absurdism is not less but more real than reality” |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We do. *S* Or perhaps that's my own exhalation for beauty's existence... your poem. *S* |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
And I too was holding my breath. Have had experiences with deer crossing here in Fla. and in Ct. both a heartbeat away. But they are so beautiful and I know where I have to go slow while driving at night. Deer here in the golf course are slowly being pushed out and we see them in odd places now. Building is going full blast the last five years and causing strange things. Last week they had to tranquilize a large bear that was moving onto the area of the Daytona Bike week crowd. They had been watching this bear and just letting him roam. He had a marker in him and they know he moved here from the Ocala National Forest. He was swimming back and forth across the Intra water way from beach side back to the other side. He was on the beach side when they had to do this and take him back to the forest. He had been not too far from my son's house here in Palm Coast a few weeks ago. He must be a strong and fast swimmer. Thanks for this Sunshine. Enjoyed it. martyjo [This message has been edited by latearrival (03-09-2006 03:01 AM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved this one, SIL! ....jo |
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the grey Member
since 2006-01-06
Posts 119Queensland, Australia. |
G'day Kailea. A magic moment for sure. All to sadly we see so much road kill here in outback Australia as Roadtrains go about there busy schedules. I will post a rather humorous tale about travelling by caravan in the outback and hope you get a laugh out of it. It is called 'Caravanning Mayhem.' Cheers mate Merv |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
As with all of your poems great job Tommy |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
in that moment when some intelligent nudge of inner sense knows How well I know this, and have had to slam on those brakes. Why just this morning, I did it again, when a dog ran in front of me! Great write, Sunshine. I hope you are doing well. hugs, misce |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Meant to cart this off to my library, but forgot to scan the barcode! You couldn't have posted anything this morning that could have been more significant to me. Thanks, Sunshine. misce |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I remember many evening Kari, through the mists and fogs watching them in all their beauty...Loved this slice of nature today Lady. |
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