Open Poetry #37 |
Love... The Real Way |
Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
One last night With my thoughts in the air This is the last night I let my thoughts wonder there Thought I lost something That would never again be mine But was reminded today She wasn’t my only sublime I can find love where needed There are many fish in the sea And I know there are others out there Who would try to really love me Maybe someone I want With traits that really attract And when I say “I love you” It will be through complete fact I won’t have to seconded guess I would come from the hart And she wouldn’t get mad When I needed a day apart I will sleep without a problem Tomorrow’s another day I will find someone out there Who will love me the real way |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Simple yet sincere It deserves to be noticed. Yet . . . what is the real way? John |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent write Matt. |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
It changed from night to day very fast. But the over all poem had a nice flow - love to read more of you poems *thumbs up* x0x0 |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
I agree with Free_Spirit07. This had a lovely flow throughtout. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Deep_Inside Enjoyed the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...when we receive what we don't want, it helps us to define what we do want...James |
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