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Mother of Michelle |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand 
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Mother of Michelle 05 March 2006 Mother of Michelle heart and soul This girl who it was God stole Taken if not borrowed a new angel sent forth Her happiness a heart - gifted to heaven on road to course Mother of Michelle she will never forget Her daughter’s love those tears she has wept Taken by - never from a heart Mother of Michelle to death do thy truly depart Michelle, ma belle ,These are words that go together well My Michelle, Michelle, ma belle Sont des mots qui vont tre's bien ensemble Tre's bien ensemble I love you, I love you, I love you that's all I want to say, Until I find a way I will say the only words I know you'll understand Beatles—Michelle (John Lennon/ Paul McCartney) a poet who cares [This message has been edited by poettothecars (03-05-2006 08:46 PM).] |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
the line "Taken by never from a heart" may have been a typo on my part only I choose not to correct it to read instead as "Taken but never from a heart" even if that maybe unpoetic of me a poet who cares |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
This is very nice aye! I don't think you could change a thing  great job x0x0 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you, Christopher!  |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
It am still amazed how a poem can write itself in two minutes, yet last forever and even after 5000 pages, (and 10 years, yet I had composed but 150 by April 1999) that never appears to change. This is why I call my works, fireproof memories When those memories may not all be good to keep. You never know what the poet was thinking of or the outcome of such serenity As to 12 months ago - here is such an example of time. If anyone wants to do the maths. 3869 Loving Someone Too 05 March 2005 Loving someone is just about the scariest thing - one will ever do But do you realize - it is also the most precious too In thought - in answer in truth as well Sure certainly love is hell Him and her she and he Left and right and what loving is meant to be To give - to take to borrow but not to steal Yes loving someone does have a wonderful appeal “for Christina” “And hope maketh not ashamed; because the love of God is shed abroad in our hearts by the Holy Ghost which is given unto us.” Romans 5: 5 KJV a poet who cares |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely tribute, Christopher. Thank you for remembering Michelle... |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
I set out to write a poem about California I think I tripped up in way of the outcome Of words that came into my mind, I knew were in need to be written down Who was the Poet, God or ME a poet who cares |
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