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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2006-03-05 12:03 PM

Happy birthday darlin’
though I can’t recall the year,
I don’t imagine that disturbs you
very much

Your face, smiling from the dimness
of that pub deep in Virginia
as I walked through the door
will remain
one of my best stories
‘til I got no more to tell

I don’t have much else
to give you, than I did then,
some words, some thoughts,
some heart from my pen

just thought I’d let you know
I remembered
and I wish you love
and everything

Happy birthday darlin’
I remember when...

Spot
Junior Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 45
CA, US

1 posted 2006-03-05 12:09 PM

quote:
I don’t have much else
to give you, than I did then,
some words, some thoughts,
some heart from my pen

I really felt these lines.

You captured the intentions of the speaker and I can identify; I enjoyed this a lot

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-03-05 12:27 PM

"just thought I’d let you know
I remembered
and I wish you love
and everything"

This poem speaks loudly. Well done.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2006-03-05 02:01 AM

There is no finer gift than this, and you sure
wrapped up your Birthday wishes so nice.

You're a good man, goob heart!!!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2006-03-05 06:55 AM

Sigh.

Wish it was my birthday you were talking about so eloquently. I like this very much!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-03-05 09:35 AM

See? You're such a good Porch Puppy...at least you remembered.

Now, do it again. If you tell another story, you may just get Konrad to emerge. You never know.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2006-03-05 09:53 AM

Duncan
You are the man.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2006-03-05 11:10 AM

Duncan, you make every girl want to be the one waiting in that pub..deep in Virginia.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2006-03-05 09:49 PM

I hear they throw beer all over ya at those bars in Virginia

...dangerous places!!!

I know she's thrilled you remembered, an unexpected birthday surprise, a beautiful poem, and special, heartfelt memories

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2006-03-05 09:58 PM

This is just so cool....!

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2006-03-05 09:58 PM

clever, very clever...I had it figured out from the get-go. You want I should send you my old calendar notes?

LOL
Happy Birthday to her from me too!

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