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Open Poetry #37

Internal Freeze

ErikaStaples
Junior Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 24
SC

0 posted 2006-03-03 10:02 PM

Sorry, I've been off this site for awhile. After moving I had to redo my computer, and lost all my online favorites and have been busy. But I'm back, and hope to post poems more often.... Oh, and my second book is finally finished!
http://www.publishedauthors.net/spiralsofnature/index.html

Internal Freeze

Outside in morning mist,
snow bleeds from the sky
as the wind whips,
and slowly time passes by.

The rain drops drips remorse,
yet in the cold degrees
snow must takes its course
causing sorrow’s internal freeze.

Hope can die in an instant
but forever dreams carry on.
http://www.publishedauthors.net/erikastaples/index.html

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

1 posted 2006-03-04 11:51 AM

Wow! Very deep....and interesting..
I simply love it!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2006-03-04 12:03 PM

Ooh, nice! I'm glad you tumbled back in here again!

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ErikaStaples
Junior Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 24
SC

3 posted 2006-03-04 12:11 PM

Thank you both!

Hope can die in an instant
but forever dreams carry on.
http://www.publishedauthors.net/erikastaples/index.html
http://www.publishedauthors.net/spi

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-03-05 10:25 PM

"Outside in morning mist,
snow bleeds from the sky"

Excellent!

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