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Open Poetry #37

shining on

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

0 posted 2006-03-03 12:47 PM

Ice melts outside my door today
As the sunshine returns again
embracing the frozen land and
warming the heart of winter
She sends love to the world
rays of hope and connection to thought
the only one to awaken us from the long sleep
the first to touch the earth and bring it life
It started on a small scale, a miniature creation
some say the big bang created a noise
so loud it shook our souls from the universe
and sprinkled us like a summer rain
over a cold stone ... an uneven oddity
the perfection of all time and space
it was here that the moon and stars point to,
and here is where we dream
we dream of what life really is
it is the wonder
it is the question and it is even more so the
answer to what all seek
and all the while it is inside your eyes
while you speak, and while you act
shining on, and on forever


J D W III  3-3-2006

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-03-03 05:45 PM

aujussy wolf
Good wwrie and I enjoyed the read.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2006-03-03 08:49 PM

thanks good sir ! glad you liked it
- aujus

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-03-05 12:21 PM

"some say the big bang created a noise
so loud it shook our souls from the universe
and sprinkled us like a summer rain
over a cold stone ... "

Now that's just a magic poem.

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