Open Poetry #37 |
Past Life |
Risai New Member
since 2006-03-02
Posts 1 |
A little girl born of two Hair dartk with eyes of blue One part rise one part from the fall This is the story that will tell you all Before the days of the second Great War, in a hosue in japan that stood on the shore. a gril was born from love untrue. she had hair that was dark yet eyes of blue. her father gone before she was born her mother distraught now she started to mourn. Tragic fate now brought a curse, so the pain on the daughter would be much worse. She raised her love and all she could give, she continued to work so her Daughter could live. Her energy drained from the love that she gave, a lonely heart now love it would crave. an angel in shackles, wanting to fly. herself from her daughter she could not pry. A nameless lover for her he did call, so easily did her heart forget all. Alone and afraid this child was left. all joy she had felt was now bereft. For years she would wonder the land in the east she was not wanted and seen as the least. Fate's hand guided her far she found a place where the was a star. A savior she found one of beauty and fame, born in the city that was now her name. She cared for her as if she was her own. she relieved all ehr pain as she had grown. A loving bond now formed between the two a great emotion the child never knew. Now comes the time of great peril and strife. an end soon shall come to her life. The erupted in chaos and death, she feared soon she would breath her last breathe Her fears came to pass as death took her friend, the only thing left was the coming of the end. A man she had loved now shattered her trust as she saw his intention as nothing but lust. he took a life that was not ready to go, if her took his own we will never know This is the part we cannot deny this girl's name was Risai it said it was so on the stone by her grave, but no memories of her did anyone save. no flowers would adorn this place, instead they left toys the wind would chase who did she know or who cared enough to bury her body her soul did slough The story i told was dearly true there was a girl of raven and blue. the reason i know this it is for sure i know all for i was her |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Risai, a sad and haunting story told with love. Welcome to PIP. martyjo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Often a past life may clarify the present. Welcome to PiP. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions.. I much enjoyed your first post And I know you will love it here. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ Please check your email for a special greeting~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
welcome to passions..seems you are an excellent fit with your first offering. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Loved this!! and looking forward to more! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Risai....Sad and well done. Welcome to Passions! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This was interesting.. I like your idea behind this and it was exploding with emotion.. Welcome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Risai. An introspective write, I do hope to see more from you soon. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Welcome Risai, A sad story told beautifully. There are many more children like this one in the world. May they be loved. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Exquisite -- and what a marvelous first post! YOU will find kindred spirits here, to be sure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Within your words, Risai remains with us. Welcome to Passions. Thank you for honoring and sharing the story of Risai. |
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