»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #37
»
Regrets
| Open Poetry #37 |
|
Regrets |
|
|
SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts 
|
This pain I feel, It’s all real, I never wanted to hurt you, I only wanted you to see the truth. Now I almost think, I made the biggest mistake. Though I thought I was helping, All I did was worsen the situation. A wave of doubt runs over my body, As I regret what I can never take back. You’ll never really know what I meant, You’ll see only what you want. My words came spilling out, even though I had so many doubts. I was wrong, even though neither of us were right. Tears mean nothing, As I finally begin to feel my thoughtless heart. I feel as I haven’t felt in forever, Now I know, All this guilt, all this regret, That I’ve been carrying since I can’t even remember, Will always be with me, And now one more thing has been added to my large collection of shame. |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
A beautiful poem that seemed to slip between blunt emotion and flowing eloquence that I thorougly enjoyed |
||
|
Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
ouch Seek thee out thr terror moon, seek thee out the chaos fire, seek thee out the Havyk |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It seems so forlorn Sara. Excellent work. |
||
|
SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
Thank you very much, everyone! |
||
aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I know what u mean sarbear i am a love mess !! In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
