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Open Poetry #37

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Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-02-26 05:37 PM

Do control freaks dream
Counting spreadsheets
As others
Count dreams
And relax to rebuild tomorrow

to find the freaks control

Do control freaks wonder
Of their fear of failure
As others
Fail to fear
And take the pain the freaks harbour

To sail over the lives of those who would achieve

Would try to achieve

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dave

smithdr
Junior Member

since 2006-02-25

Posts 26

1 posted 2006-02-26 05:59 PM

I've read probably thirty poems on this forum today.

This is by far the best.

Great Work.

David

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2006-03-10 10:58 PM

Enjoyed the read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2006-03-11 12:51 PM

I'm pretty sure,
this should definitely be higher on the list.
Enjoyed.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2006-03-11 02:54 AM

Enjoyed it all four times I read it

and then He created the horse...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2006-03-11 05:13 AM

enjoyed,
dont care much for those control freaks~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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