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Open Poetry #37

Was it that you thought

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-02-26 05:16 PM

The inspriration of this has always come from the Jungle on an old Tag site.

Brian once called me "Sir Dave of Tag" but it freed up so much talent

This is as usual an "amalgam of themes"

Dave

Fingers danced watching steam

On a journey reaching within yourself

Riding a ticket you never purchased

Two bodies intertwined
  Like heat from the ice
  The fear
  Pounding in your heart
  Like ice monsters in your head
  The knees clicking stuccato
  In your cold world
  The feverish twirls
  And daring turns
  To bring you home and spills
  The gentle heat
  Of your heart
  To melt your path below
  The warmth of your love
  To say "I love you so"
  What firey passion
  Could ever turn the head
  Of the quiet observer
  In the shadowy corner
  Who sees the fiery passion
  In the dancing strangers
  And knows
  And remembers
  The Snow go

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2006-03-10 11:00 PM

Love it!

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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