Open Poetry #37 |
Thinking |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
THINKING 17 July 2000 Electrifying brain-flashes. Puzzle-pieces of logic reshape into flowing smudges of harmonizing voice-clouds and blasts of rainbow sky-smears and the spirit savours sunshine and forest fragrance. And new worlds and new words and bluebirds swoop into the face of stagnation and stagnation explodes into a volcanic display of a thousand, sky-high petals that flutter into larks that turn and soar above the clouds quivering with song that echoes through the mind and lifts it to greet the wind and sun. - Owl |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Diana Like a breeze in spring time, your thoughts travel to me. Thank you. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank YOU, Martie. - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely movement in this poem Diana. Greatly enjoyed. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Nice ride I mean write. :-) |
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lgina Member
since 2004-07-20
Posts 52 |
What a good title. My favorite line "lifts up to meet the wind and sun." Really enjoyed this write. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Diana, sometimes you are simply a blessing to read...and so is your poetry. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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2CatchASwan2 New Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 6 |
i love the imagery in this! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you so much, Kate. Glad you enjoyed it. Giggles, Steven, and thanks! Thanks Igina. I absolutely love thinking, as crazy as it sounds and the whole poem is the way I feel about thinking. Thank you for your kind words, Ratleader. I am glad you enjoy reading me and my poetry. Thank you 2CatchaSwan. Glad you did. - Owl |
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