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She Wind. Whispers.
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She Wind. Whispers. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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She Wind. Whispers. Wind startled curtains fluttering above their heads, her sighs fill the silence between them whispers follow and rise to a crescendo night fades. Andrew |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, this whispers ever so soft. Reminds me of the song... (clears throat)  "When the rain beats against my window pane, I'll think of summer days again, and dream of you" Very pretty poetry, Marshalzu~ |
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smithdr Junior Member
since 2006-02-25
Posts 26 |
An enjoyable read. David |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marshalzu To me it's mostly memory. LOL Enjoyed |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
'whispers follow and rise to a crescendo' Like this imagery.  sensual. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awesome write. TD |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
that was beautiful to read the images it creates within ones mind....are most lovely |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautifully said. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Wind startled curtains fluttering above their heads" Lovely Andrew. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was so plentiful with images that took me away to a beach front hut, curtain walls lovely |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for all the lovely replies. Andrew |
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