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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Extremes I’d like to write about extreme Reality to subtle dream From hottest hot to coldest cold From threshold to that untold A mental arrow from my bow To targets beyond my know With shaft of curiosity And feathers of pure destiny I would the point to pierce the mark Into the core of light and dark To strike a lightening thunder bolt And open up this jail of dolt I would beyond the grass is green I would beyond the field of glean I would beyond the seem of seem And move beyond the subtle dream Perhaps I seek beyond my breath Perhaps the answer comes with death |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I suppose many answers will come with death, more then we can begin to fathom, but for now, while we're here we can certainly take advantage of the time...and create lotsa smiles, as you do us, each and every morning Happy Friday  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wish you'd write of lighter things, Spinning wheels, a caged bird that sings, Nothing depressing or this extreme, Today I surely read only a dream? Nicely done Sir Sy. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent poem sir. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A mental arrow from my bow To targets beyond my know With shaft of curiosity And feathers of pure destiny I would the point to pierce the mark Into the core of light and dark To strike a lightening thunder bolt And open up this jail of dolt ~*~ The archer in me appreciated this a lot, Sy... thank you for the pleasantries... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweety I agree,  Sharon, Then read In a Meadow.  Lady, Thank you My lady. Sunshine, Don't you just love to ramble. I do |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You give me such joy, sy. You have a way of say of saying complicated things, simply. That is an art, lovie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity You really are a love. |
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