Open Poetry #37 |
Changing |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Changing In the changing of dust and grime Indeed I am a seed of chance A moment in the dance of time The nuance of a pointed lance Perhaps I am a rain drops drop Along with others in the fall To wet the cleaning of a mop To cleanse the essence of the all A particle of factors seem A stitch within the cloth of coup A mini myriad of a dream The forming of the morning’s dew Perhaps I’m just a firefly Igniting in the soul of core That lights each night the light of why To torch the path of evermore Of little or no significance In miniscule of inference |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And, perhaps you are a most wonderful writer.. Come to share his words with us! Good morning dear Sy! Hope you have a great day.. The tea is ready...I'll pour. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Perhaps I’m just a firefly Igniting in the soul of core That lights each night the light of why To torch the path of evermore" I really enjoyed this one! Perhaps you are great! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You're always significant, my friend! *S* Remember... fireflies bring smiles... and belief that magic exists even in the mundane. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear for the read and comment. Lady, Perhaps, thank you dear. suthern, I know, just funning. |
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lgina Member
since 2004-07-20
Posts 52 |
Mr. Tabin, I like your name. Your poem expressed a different kind of change. I very much ejoyed the write. Thank you kind sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
lgina You are very kind, thank you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
morning sir enjoyed your art the visions your words paint~ My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES, Good morning and thank you once again. |
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Jack Straw Member
since 2006-03-02
Posts 70 |
I like the poems that I've read from you so far. The arms of a dream was great also. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jack Straw Glad you enjoyed them and my thanks for the read and comment. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana, Thank you dear. |
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