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Mind in the Gutter
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Mind in the Gutter |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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Laying on the nightstand 300 dollars rolled real tight rubber banded left for me I knew what it was for I did my job well Kids have to be fed Lights have to be on He rolled over stale with cigarette smoke coughing up a lung smiling gratefully he scratched his belly grabbed the remote with contentment finally when the commercials ran he looked up at me my hair mussed eyes tired glittered with perfume and asked me what he should have asked from the start “how was work tonight, hun?” looking down at my ring I laughed a little and responded… “About as good as it gets for a bartender dear…” |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Caught me expecting something else with this one Page. Good one. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL......you are a joy! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you both... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very clever,enjoyed. martyjo |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
A humourous one.  |
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