Open Poetry #37 |
The One Thing Duct Tape Cannot Fix |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Trace the blood back to my heart and do your best to wipe up the trail of red I leave wherever I go try to tape the pieces of me back together but know that I'm not the same now that I've been broken and that my wound may very well be a mortal one to never fully heal but instead slowly ever so slowly bleed me to death |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oooohhhh... excellent Rhonda! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Uh oh! Humpty Dumpty heart! ~ K ~ ~ Karen ~ |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*BUGS* I love you. If you would be known, and not know, vegetate in a village; If you would know, and not be known, live in a city. |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
This one just cries out with pain... very well written... Tera |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Like this description here... 'Trace the blood back to my heart and do your best to wipe up the trail of red I leave wherever I go' Enjoyed. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
OK, but if you duct tape the guy to a tree, pour honey all over him and drizzle a thin trail of honey to the nearest anthill, it could help. *smile* Well done poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@icebox!! Too funny..but, perhaps worth a try. Love ya pretty gal~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very powerful, Rhonda....it's too bad there isn't a quick fix foe everything.... ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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