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blessing of the sea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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blessing of the sea… Like an unpretentious delusion brings the world so still & alive unrevealed to discover pure heart open mind with glistening kisses & enhancement oh beloved timeless perception simplicity draws my foolish soul to a languid balance where no words are seen awakening metaphysical possibilities existing in the complexity of blind eyes nurturing like a mother loving like a lover sup the embodied incense of direct surroundings… illicit love light demonstrating an unknowable journey telling a story that swims an existence pretending to be smite through a semi-aquatic reflex which carries compelling emotional charge raison d’etre where sacred fires ignite creation a new world richly midwives re-learning to cherish a deeply buried space which has no person's name. deeper then life wrapped in sounds the pulse drums energy clarity of one where moon people search the grove waxing a fullness between sea’s seasons tells of leaves and grasses flowing vibrant green tides to us in composed breeze living essence of our celestial womb spiraling to rhythms of natures home coming as a dancer where still night grows eternal flow, like gentle ripples in the sea voicing echoes taunting memory most passionate reminder of our will sketching forth an implausible truth we are this formula where visions dance energies grace…unto this illusion I escape |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
something with green strings untied and salty flavored just a bit of dancing too enjoyed you lady |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“like gentle ripples in the sea voicing echoes taunting memory most passionate reminder of our will sketching forth an implausible truth” And I can hear those echoes in every word in this write. Beautiful, as always, Lee J. JL  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This read as though whispered to me in my mother's womb: "oh beloved timeless perception simplicity draws my foolish soul to a languid balance where no words are seen awakening metaphysical possibilities existing in the complexity of blind eyes nurturing like a mother loving like a lover" You write the primordial.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful... believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
spiraling to rhythms of natures home coming as a dancer where still night grows eternal flow, like gentle ripples in the sea voicing echoes This part just jumped out to me, Lee. It is so beautiful!! Hugs, Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Voicing echoes"...indeed! Magical wordplay LeeJ. Loved this. TD |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Can't choose a favorite line or lines... it's all lovely. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful illusion, LeeJ... I am enjoying this one for many savored lines...  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Leej - It's always hard to highlight specifics in your poems but I particularly like this : "oh beloved timeless perception simplicity draws my foolish soul to a languid balance where no words are seen awakening metaphysical possibilities existing in the complexity of blind eyes nurturing like a mother loving like a lover" And, yes, you are still amazing! |
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