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sheisshe winter |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the old ones weave their fingers into baskets of pray songs and bend the brittle sticks of their knees into the earth they offer silver to the medicine fires from their heads of white wire as they wear the coats of tears worn by their journey men fathers tree people gather their bows and let fly their arrows of wind into the snow vales soft bellys to turn their shadows into dancing she drinks from those waters when the rainbows are hard stones that swim with oil on their skin upstream into the hiding furrows she is free from her men and runs with her hair down when she turns her back on the meadows and gives her song to the mountains it is then when she is, when she is she _______________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Painting her loverly, again... as she awaits some spring... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"she is free from her men and runs with her hair down when she turns her back on the meadows and gives her song to the mountains it is then when she is, when she is she" There is nothing more beautiful then a woman that raditates on her own...so that she becomes blinding with another.. Loved it, Mr. D. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you for your warm touch here. ________ suzieC, you do enjoy those strident women don't you...(me too)thanks lady friend |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
she is strong in the hearts of many, a godess in her own right... loved this...and it's most intellectual visions... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej...she is kind of a naughty hotty huh..thanks for the eyes my friend |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhhh yes, indeed, a true hotty most elegant and serene... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Darling D, I don't think strident is the right word....I like an independent, strong woman that knows when to speak up... She needn't be loud or obtrusive in her nature.. She just needs to know her battles and how to convince the most fanatic of opposers to join her.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j, thank you again.. ______________ suzieC..as you wish lady friend, was considering more of the "vehement" version of the term...they are the strident ones I admire..the passionate ones...as this winter woman is with her storming |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
She gives her song to the mountains...aspiring thoughts. I can see her hair cascading, soft and free, like ropes undone. ~ Karen ~ |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Winter....she is she.... mmm.... filled with beauty... Great poetry as usual :-) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms KL, yes, the frayed braids of lovely, thanks lady friend ________________ ms airG, thank you for touching her hem with your eyes here. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This reminds me so much of one of JM's beautiful photos--her spirit transcends the lens, and I may be wrong about the source of your inspire, but I know that you know what I know--er, I think.  ?I do adore this gentle side of you D.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "she is free from her men and runs with her hair down when she turns her back on the meadows and gives her song to the mountains it is then when she is, when she is she" I know this feeling!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweet serene... both sides of me is gentle metal...(grin) but I do know of the spirit speak you refer to..thanks lady ______________ ms martie darn it yes you keep running but you do look lovely doing so |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
know the feeling of this one~ My spirit will rise |
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