Open Poetry #37 |
That’s Cool |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
That’s Cool Riding high the wave I missed. Somewhere in my minds gray matter, as in a dream of fine mist and sea foam… (I do know my way to the beach, but only because the waves carry me there). Now tasting the loneliness of not being there, with you. Wondering if that, at least, might have mattered… A world gone mad in a lost life, which at best, is now shattered… Wilderness, forests, or jungle, that would have made the perceptive fray a bit more palatable. At least the sides would have been equal for the struggle… But to win, one must betray holiness. Righteous living is fools gold to that perception. Winning is everything, the gusto of living without the trouble. (The time needed which always seems to create problems). The wax on my board is thin, and winning to this wave is not that important I’ll move cautiously forward, be cool, and hang ten… |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
JL...sitting here off of surfer's point in Ventura watching the tinfoil green wrappers with salt and the rubbersuit boys on their arrows dodging the bonebreaks..and there you were with this one...enjoyed it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...thoroughly enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I forgot what I was going to say after reading DS reply. LOL, have spent many hours at surfers point in the past, but don't remember green foil. ? Anyway, JL, I enjoyed this read |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You brought home a wonderful memory, JL. Thank you for the smiles. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Cool write, JL! Hang ten! ...jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the states of our lives is really nothing more then our state of minds..good thoughts harvest corn.... clam bake anyone? so so good to read you again...I miss you when you don't post... [This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-22-2006 10:35 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Much Applause...excellent visuals, and beautiful metaphor. TD |
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