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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2006-02-21 06:06 PM

That’s Cool

Riding high the wave I missed.
Somewhere in my minds gray matter,
as in a dream of fine mist and sea foam…
(I do know my way to the beach,
but only because the waves carry me there).

Now tasting the loneliness of not being there, with you.
Wondering if that, at least, might have mattered…

A world gone mad in a lost life,
which at best, is now shattered…

Wilderness, forests, or jungle,
that would have made the perceptive fray a bit more palatable.
At least the sides would have been equal
for the struggle…

But to win, one must betray holiness.
Righteous living is fools gold to that perception.
Winning is everything, the gusto of living without the trouble.
(The time needed which always seems to create problems).

The wax on my board is thin,
and winning to this wave is not that important
I’ll move cautiously forward,
be cool,
and hang ten…

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2006-02-21 07:36 PM

JL...sitting here off of surfer's point in Ventura watching the tinfoil green wrappers with salt and the rubbersuit boys on their arrows dodging the bonebreaks..and there you were with this one...enjoyed it

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-02-21 07:42 PM

Excellent write...thoroughly enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-02-21 07:51 PM

I forgot what I was going to say after reading DS reply. LOL, have spent many hours at surfers point in the past, but don't remember green foil. ?
Anyway, JL, I enjoyed this read