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sandstone splinters with lime |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the hollow sky seashell of empty gathers winds in her womb and wears slippers to the ball the backs of the ravens are but songs that the night strums with her breezes when they fly by the amber leaves of pretending oaks with lazy leans and goofy foot pretending roots where only edges remain pacifica is that gypsy mothering streams giving them the breasts of horizons to fill their scars with sand and the panting teeth of their weeds before her tomorrows make tears that turn them to rivered sins what god will be their coffee house then __________daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sad sad event...I'm thinking this was about all those Philippine children who have lost their lives...that's what this reminded me of...???? thank you D. and Good Morning |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Your poetry...it is as if the words are turned inside out revealing all the more beauty of words ....... |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
As usual Dark, it was a pleasure to read. The whole poem was a gem but what really punched me in the face was "the panting teeth". I don't know where it all comes from but keep it coming. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really enjoyed this poem  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you pipfriendeyes, you guys bless me with your reviews |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Your poems always catch at my breath. They have an edge to them that makes me trip over the meaning and go back for a second look. I find myself 'reaching' to balance. Wonderful art! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very sad, but brilliantly worded. JL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms KL, thank you for a stumble then...would catch you with my big yellow velcro three fingered hands.. _____________ friend JL, humble thanks to you for the eye-by view |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You remind me of a wonderful tree I even sat on its roots... as if a throne. Keep writing. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
hmmmm!... April does not get away from you! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"before her tomorrows make tears that turn them to rivered sins" Amazing Stranger... as always. |
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