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Shaped by the Heart
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Shaped by the Heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Shaped by the Heart It's laying there in the wake, not heart shaped but shaped by the heart, words unsolicited, a week old waiting to be felt, the need of the senses to be touched to complete... It's in the darkness when the night whispers, when being unnoticed suffocates the spark of promise, where life is divided and thoughts are ready to self-destruct and silence sorrows the mind. It's the years of unknowing... reality laying in cellophaned pages shelved for none to see those between the lines waiting for the hands of time to reach out to mind the absent to pillow the tears of a "monotonous life" and measure the words, not in segments, but in their entirety. It's there in the mirror's reflection, standing behind you, waiting for a hand to interlace to bring forward, to stand beside in support, releasing the boundaries to shape tomorrow and weave those dreams into real. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well related, soulful heartbeats here M... TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It's there in the mirror's reflection, standing behind you, this was profound...with special meaning |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Another fantastic write Maureen... Very much enjoyed. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, "and weave those dreams into real." I know how you feel. Beautiful work |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. you walk a familiar path...whether alone or in the company of others...and that mirror sometimes haunts us as we look and see ourselves as we are...as well as as we can be. |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
a Poem is not fully completed ....waiting...and waiting... until the hands of the eyes reach out and grasp between the lines.. Is the message that I received from this poem... Hope I am correct... Wonderful work...I thoroughly enjoyed reading it... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Enjoyed  Made me think though and that kind of hurt, this early in the day... and then He created the horse... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
TD, thank you Lee, special meaning for sure...for Valentine's Day after... Nancy, thank you for the nice comment ...I had left a very nice response to all but then had too many images and it wouldn't take it nor save it on my back button...sighing... So I am a bit generic now in my responses to you all. Sy, thank you, I believe you do know how I feel...  Barry, all too familiar that view in the mirror. Air Goddess, not completed until it is received, you are correct. Skyfire, it's really not so bad to be made to think in the morning..I do my best writing then, thanks hugs M |
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