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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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Figure eights, the threads skate across icy skys of grey. I'd follow there into the air if just one thread would stay. I'd find the home from far I roamed. They say 'tis but a dream. But I've seen it there, a chance to dare, a silver thread, that leads that way. While threads unravel in the wind I want to run straight to them follow one last silver one to the place before it came undone. ~*~*~*~*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling here... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thanks, K......  ....jojo |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: As always...Wonderful ! Even though it stirs me to say much...I dare not say more. Good job. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank you, Larry, for the kind post.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Jo~ this is just delightful - loved it ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Glad you liked it, Tracie! Thank you kindly.  .......jo |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
i really like this, it has a really nice flow. Keep it up! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I keep holding onto that silver thread... M |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Much enjoyed this write jo. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
to follow a silver thread to a golden destination.... lovely adventure! ~ Karen ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'd find the home from far I roamed. They say 'tis but a dream. But I've seen it there, a chance to dare, a silver thread, that leads that way. all we've got to do is weave it... stunning |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
silver threads...iron chains, sinews of an arm...all a part of what might be. You did well with this...the flow was very good with perhaps one hiccup...but overall, nice! Good message |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This shines a kindly light from a dreaming heart...thank you Jo... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"But I've seen it there, a chance to dare, a silver thread, that leads that way." Enchanting Jo. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I wish I had a river I could skate away on..." |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
great poem.... it is awesome |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Gorgeous thoughts, iliana~ Enjoyed, very much~ |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
I really like this one. Hugs, Kathy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
follow one last silver one to the place before it came undone. ~*~ Yeah. Me, too.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So glad this came up again otherwise I would have missed it. Beautiful write, Jo. Threads are such delicate things. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Yes we all travel that trip but it isn't that simplified as one thread as it unravels as we tug Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, such innocence and wonder fills this gorgeous piece, dearest friend, I too have always wondered where the rainbow ends whenever I see one, and swear it doesn't always lead to a pot of gold, there must also be fairy glens and prismatic jungles where the come from too, yay! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
positivly lovely, love Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thanks to all of you wonderful poets/poetesses. Your comments are so sweet! .....jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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