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The Father Up Above
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The Father Up Above |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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The Father Up Aboveas I climbed up the mountain high When I finally reached the top I looked up toward the sky I stood upon the mountain high searching for my God above Although I could not see him I could feel his love For as far back as I can remember I always went to his house anytime the doors were opened sitting as quiet as a mouse As the preacher gave his sermon I listened very carefully about the father up above watching over you and me Today, as I recall those times I wish that I was young again and could go back to those times where I had once been By Sue Graves 1-8-06 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiSweetSuzieQ~ Wonderful write of memories ... hoping you've found your way back to His House, I know you've been searching and I wish you nothing but success~ Love ya' gal~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely poem Sue. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
His house, for me is always under an open sky... Well done, Sue. You're stretching... and on you, it looks good!! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
If only we could go back. This is a heartfelt write Sue. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
I can feel your thoughts, well written. Fee |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is such a positive write!! I really enjoyed reading it. And, I feel the same way, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
We can't go back exactly, but Sue, we can feel the memories...sometimes we just have to feel where we're at to find the way back up. Good read. ...jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Sue, that was a lovely piece of divine writing! I am so pleased that I noticed your post this evening! It was a very moving piece of writing and I felt every word of it! Love & God's Light,  Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all so much, for taking time to read and leave a reply. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
ah, I too remember the days of preacher's before my heart was found by the Father...but I would not go back...this journey has been painful, and I look only to the ending and a promise of no tears nice poem |
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