Open Poetry #37 |
Make-up |
FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Colours powdered, pat on to perfection. Flaws covered, to non-existence. Of greens on eyelids, like leaves on olive trees. Reds of cherry, On lips of burning fiery. Blushed cheeks, Sakura against snow sheet. Brown on brows, Carved to bow. Eyelashes flickered, as the butterfly wings. Calls to the lads, a mate to win. Make-up beautifies, Pale and frail maiden. Had our confidence heightened. |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
The power of makeup! (~_*) Great poem! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Blushed cheeks, Sakura against snow sheet." This is lovely. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Finely tuned descriptions here...enjoyed the read..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
What an exquisite painting... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I have to tell you this trick only works so long, trust me! LOL, but enjoyed the illusion that it covers all at least for a little while, and really enjoyed your poem. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Thank you all for reading and comments Make-up makes me a changed person...lol |
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